TAI: Am I making a difference, student 2

March 2019

June 2019

The biggest difference I can see in Student 2 is:
* Growth in confidence 

* A storyline forming (The second text was not finished) More ideas...

* Use of adjectives

* A mixture of simple and compound sentences

* Using different sentence starters - time connectors (One day, the next day, then)

Where to next: 

* Organizing my beginning, middle and end into separate paragraphs. 

* Using capital letter and full stops in the right places.

* Using more punctuation such as exclamation marks and using a question in a narrative.